Wednesday, October 13, 2010
Memoir 2
It was my first ever airplane trip and first ever time going to a different state. When we got to the gigantic airport I saw the humongous airplane outside and all I kept thinking was terrible things about the airplane. Like we were going to have a collision or something. We had been on the plane for about an hour then our pilot said we were going to have turbulence. I wasn't sure what that was, so in my mind I started going berserk. I asked my mom if we were going to be okay and she said yes then explained what turbulence was. The whole rest of the airplane trip. I knew we were going to be just excellent. That kind of stuff usually happens in the movies, right?
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That was a good story Abbie. I liked how you explained the airplane.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you explained the airplane and how you were feeling. Try to make it a little longer if you can. Otherwise...fantastic!!!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said "berserk"! You could maybe make it a little bit longer, otherwise it is fantastic!!:)
ReplyDeleteNice word choice. But it could have been a little longer.
ReplyDeleteI like your word choice, Abbie. I think you should have told us where you were going to though.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job explaining and describing! The only thing that you could have done was make the story a little longer otherwise great job!
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